Thursday, January 19, 2012

The Franklin Castle - Chapter 4

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The group of people milled about the formal hall. The uncomfortable feeling in the eerie room amplified, fueled by the uncomfortable event with Yvette. Little sunlight from the windows touched the interior of the house. Several spots in the main room the wood appeared stained black as if at least one fire touched these walls. Wood beams crossed the ceiling at intervals. Across from the entry, a staircase too large for the size of the main hall wound to the upper floors.
To the right a Tiffany stained glass door led to a parlor. The glass stood out as the only new and pristine object on the first floor, beautiful with etched designs looped in circles and shapes colored in light blue and beige. Above the doors, a semi-circular similar stained glass window caught what little light offered by the entry.
The sense of sadness radiated throughout the dark house. The darkness and oppression damped the mood and became a presence in the room. To the left of the front door, a fire roared in the large stone fireplace large enough to fit Ashley. The crackled of the fire amplified through the room and offset the cool early autumn breeze. A chilly draft blew from the fireplace hit Ashley and sent a shudder through her body.
The dingy theme of the house continued with the furniture, each piece dark, dreary, and thread worn. In a corner, workers stacked ladders and scaffolds. The ceilings contained impressive frescoes sadly faded with age. Dramatically brighter, a single spot on the mural stood out more vivid than the rest. Ashley marveled at the restored section of the mural and wondered what this room must have looked like in its prime.
Ashley squirmed as she experienced the substantial oppressive sensation inside the house. Her breath quickened as she stepped away from the large group. She longed to go outside.
Ashley stood alone in front of the fire and placed her hands on the wooden mantle. She looked up at the portrait painted in oil. The crackled surface appeared dark and faded, however the stern face in the portrait unsettled her. The man in the painting appeared angry, and glared through blue eyes from the aged canvas. The vivid eyes troubled her, and caused her to look away like a schoolchild scolded by a headmaster.
“Did that thing with Yvette bother you as much as me?” Keith said from behind her. She flinched and jerked her head to look at him. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to startle you.”
“That’s all right,” Ashley said. She looked back to the painting’s blue eyes. “Yeah, it really bothered me, too.”
“This creepy painting doesn’t help,” Keith said.
“Did you see the look on her face?” Ashley whispered. “She was terrified.”
“I know,” Keith said.
Ashley’s father and Dr. Lyman walked up to the painting with Dr. Fran. Ashley led Keith deeper into the main hall, past the stairway, away from the others.
She leaned towards Keith and spoke in a low voice. “Have you ever known a time when Yvette was wrong about anything with her psychic powers?”
“I don’t know,” Keith said. He rubbed the back of his head.
“I do know,” Ashley said. “And I can’t remember when she hasn’t been spot on. She may not flaunt her abilities like the others, but I can’t remember when she’s been wrong.”
“Okay?” Keith said.
“She’s a very neat person. She used to read my palm to tell my fortune. She was not like a fortune-teller at the fair that relies on observational tricks. She was specific about my future. She predicted my Dad would accept a job in Atlanta and we moved from Chicago. We did. She predicted I would go to a prestigious prep school, and I start at one in a couple of weeks.”
“She also predicted you would meet a Hollywood movie star and sweep you off your feet,” Keith said. “That hasn’t happened.”
“Yet,” Ashley added, her face broke into a momentary smile. “I have hope for that one.”
“My point is,” Ashley said. “If Yvette was frightened by this house, then I am scared as well.” 
Dr. Fran walked past Ashley and Keith and led the rest of the group in that direction. He approached a diagonal wall at the end of the main hall. He tugged on two ornate wooden doors that contained frosted glass with several cracks webbed through the design. After several attempts, the doors flung open and revealed a dining room.
Dr. Fran motioned everyone inside the room with a flourish.

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Wednesday, January 11, 2012

The Franklin Castle - Chapter 3

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Ashley looked out the window as the car turned into the long driveway.
Keith leaned towards Ashley and spoke in a soft voice in her ear. “This is the haunted house we’re staying in this weekend?”
“Not too bad, I guess,” Ashley said.
The neighborhood appeared old to Ashley, very old. Many of the buildings were over a hundred years old. The district contained numerous beautiful homes. Evident was the owners pride to restore their homesteads to their original glory. Other homes appeared in terrible disrepair, some on the threshold of condemnation. This house fell somewhere between luxury and dumpiness and seemed to Ashley to lean towards the decrepit end of the spectrum.
“With the right owner and some cheery landscaping, this has potential to be nice,” Ashley said. “At one time, this must have been a stunning mansion.”
The mansion, made of brown stones, towered three stories over a basement. Windows peeked from the ground below the first floor porch like watchful eyes following their every move. The house, narrow at the front, stretched long towards the back of the property.
“I read last year in school that taxation for a house built in the eighteenth century depended on how much frontage on the house,” Ashley said to Keith. “They built their homes with narrow fronts that stretched back to become massive places. In the Georgetown section of Washington DC, only the frontage of the homes appraised for taxation. There were many homes just wide enough in the front for the door and nothing else.”
The driveway ran along the right side of the house, flush against a two-story blue home in the adjacent lot. A vacant lot to the left of the house appeared just bulldozed with rubble strewn about the high weeds.
The right front corner of the house nearest the driveway rounded to a turret on the third floor. A circular balcony on the second floor wrapped around the windows. The stone gargoyles, which flanked both sides of the balcony, completed the home’s gothic theme. The stone guardians glared at anyone brave enough to look up. The left side of the house squared with a jutting with a balcony on each floor that ended in a sharp gable on the top floor. A widow’s walk connected the turret and the gable. Twenty feet back from the front porch, the house extended to the left for twice the width of the frontage, which looked like an addition to the original house but still a hundred years old. Stained glass windows adorned the newer addition.
“The house is so dark and evil looking,” Keith said.
“Architecturally, it looks spooky,” Ashley said. “Despite any legends of hauntings, it looks like something terrible could have happened here. I can imagine a restless ghost still living here today.”
“I can’t imagine why anyone would want to live here,” Keith said.
“And we have to live here the next couple of days,” Ashley said, and smiled at Keith.
Ashley’s body shivered when the car stopped in the driveway. A sense of dread spread through the pit of her stomach.
The car Ashley rode in made up the rear of the caravan. Passengers from the other vehicles exited before Ashley’s car stopped. The iron gate closed behind their car.
Ashley looked out the rear window and saw a lanky man, with incredible bright red hair. He struggled with all his weight to close the gate. In a neighborhood full of muted colors, he stood out with an orange T-shirt, blue jeans, and purple tennis shoes with orange shoestrings.
“He’s from California,” Ashley said.
“How do you know that?” Keith asked. “You’ve never been to California.”
“At least I think he looks how I expect a California person to look.”
The cars parked in the back of the property where the driveway ended at a large building separated from the main house, hidden by neglected overgrown shrubbery. A sign posted on the door read Carriage House, a two-story rectangular residence perpendicular to the main building. The garage dominated the first floor, with pull-down doors bays for three cars.
The passengers exited the cars and stretched their legs after the long drive from Hopkins International Airport. Ashley recognized all of the people except one. The group greeted each other as they walked up the driveway and around to the front of the house.
Ashley felt a chill and looked down at her arm to see goose bumps.
“Nervous about going into this haunted house?” The stranger said to Ashley, as he looked down at her arm. “I’m not quite certain what I’ll find in here either.”
Ashley’s Dad spoke from behind them. “You don’t really think this house is haunted, do you?”
“We haven’t even gone in yet and here you have an opinion?” The stranger said. “Not very scientifically objective, are we now?” His face broke into a mischievous smile, his brown hair blowing in the slight breeze.
“Oh, please,” Dr. Lyman said. “You’re talking yourself into it. Someone suggests it is haunted and you immediately believe it. People are so gullible.”
“And you are arrogant enough to suggest that I am one of those gullible people now, do you?” The stranger said.
Dr. Lyman stammered, unable to come up with a response. Ashley smiled as she attempted to conceal her pleasure. She never saw someone bite back at Dr. Lyman’s bitter comments, as she intimidated too many people. Ashley decided she liked this stranger and the way he carried himself.
The bright red-haired man shouldered his way through the group as they stopped in front of the porch. He gave Dr. Fran hearty handshake that seemed to jostle his entire lean frame. A huge smile adorned his narrow face and seemed truly glad to see the professor.
The sight of exotic red headed man next to the stodgy old-fashioned appearance of Dr. Fran Rogers amused Ashley. Between the bright color display of his client and Dr. Fran’s substantial paunch on his mid-section, the two could not have been less similar. Dr. Fran told anyone who with pride about his lemonade diet, which enabled him lose twenty pounds over the last few months. Ashley wrote in her blog that Dr. Fran owned the largest collection of drab brown ties in the world. Also noted in the blog, his lack of ability to wear his ties any further than halfway down his torso. Plaid pants completed the ensemble along with a beige shirt and tweed jacket. Dr. Fran called the color of his uncombed hair silver, which she noted he cultivated the mad scientist look with Einstein hair. His eyes appeared unnatural and large through the Coke-bottle glasses. An affable gentleman to a fault, it was a rare occasion when Dr. Fran’s voice raised in anger. Ashley remembered only a single instance of irritation from Dr. Fran. As a child, Keith and Ashley told each other ghost stories during a case to pass the time. Dr. Fran overheard them yelled at them in front of the entire team. He explained he feared they would spoil the scientific environment with such trash as ghost stories. As usual, neither her father nor Keith’s mother offered any defense.
Ashley had a theory as to why Dr. Fran never found a ghost: Because he was not looking for ghosts.
The red-haired man stepped up to the formal porch, which appeared as comfortable as a parking lot. Everything on the porch, including the benches, was made of stone.
“Nothing about this house looks happy,” Ashley said. She looked up and saw a large marble portico with stone gargoyles atop each column. Ashley stared at the hideous rock creatures and they looked back at her with malevolence.
At the top of the five stone steps were two massive red doors. A brass plaque set to the right of the door and it read Franklin Castle.
“It looks haunted,” Ashley said
“I wonder if that’s what started the whole legend,” the stranger said. “I wonder if most haunted houses have that reputation simply because of their appearance. I mean, have you ever heard of a haunted ultra-modern house?”
The front door emitted a tortured groan as the red-haired man opened it. He motioned everyone inside before he fiddled with the second set of doors. The group stood shoulder to shoulder in the dusty, small foyer. A rusted radiator to the right hissed hot steam into the humid August heat.
“Sorry, I promise the rest of the house is not blasting with heat,” the red-haired man said. “In fact, the house is always quite cool.” With a flourish, he opened the second set of doors to the main room. The doors slammed hard against the stoppers. People streamed into the dark wood trimmed main hall and peered around.
Everyone meandered into the main hall except Yvette.
Yvette Gonzales Richter, a long tenured psychic on Dr. Fran’s team, stood a slight five feet three inches tall with long dark hair. Dr. Fran referred to her as “The Anomaly” because she tested so high on his tests. She differed from the other two psychics in that she was unable to control her abilities. Experiences happened to her and images flashed in her mind. She could neither start nor stop her abilities, a victim of her power. When Yvette experienced a psychic episode, it was not pleasant.
Yvette stood in the steamy foyer and shook her head.
The man with bright-red hair stepped towards her. “What is it?” he asked, lines on his forehead creased.
She shook her head again with greater force. She grunted a few times before she mumbled. “I’m not going in.”
“What’s wrong?” Dr. Fran said as he passed through the door towards Yvette.
“I can’t go in, I just can’t,” she said. “There’s something here, something evil.”
“That’s why we need you,” Dr. Fran said.
Yvette sighed. “Okay, I’ll try.”
Dr. Fran hooked his arm under hers. As she stepped under the second doorway, she stumbled.
Tears rolled down her cheeks and she shivered. “I can’t do it. It feels like something doesn’t want me here.” She said, humming through the pause, before continuing quietly. “Or it wants me too much.”
“I need you to help us find an explanation,” Dr. Fran said.
“This is different,” she said. “This is real. This is dangerous.”
She turned and ran out of the house. When she reached the walkway outside, she turned to Dr. Fran, her eyes streaming tears and her face contorted as if in pain. “I’m sorry, I just can’t.”
She ran down the footpath to the driveway. Several moments later, a car pulled out of the driveway taking her back to the airport. The red-haired man opened the gate for her, struggling again as much as before.
Within a minute, her car sped down Franklin Boulevard.

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Friday, December 2, 2011

The Franklin Castle - Chapter 2



“The most exciting moment in any hunt for the supernatural is the buildup before arrival at the haunted site. At the starting point, the investigation is perfect where anything is possible.”
Sir Nolan Knight from his book The Royal Ghost Hunters Guide

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“Geez, Dad, could you have gotten us a car that doesn’t stink?” Ashley Dunbar asked. “You spent long enough at the rental car lot.” She looked at the back of her father’s head.
Ashley pushed a button from the back seat. The gears groaned as the window slowly lowered. The stale air blew out, replaced by the smell of exhaust fumes from the cars in traffic near them and a fine mist produced by the unnatural dark rain clouds formed during their drive. The stained upholstery held a bouquet of old cigarette smoke and sweaty body odor with a layer of deodorant on top. The smell reminded Ashley of the inside of an old outdated motel on a little used road.
Darrin Dunbar sighed. “I take what I can get. The university is not paying for this trip. This car is an upgrade compared to the other cars on the lot. I’m afraid my daughter will have to rough it for the short ride to the investigation site.”
Ashley studied the residential neighborhood. The automobile passed by old homes, made up of large and stately as well as small box homes made up the strange part of town. Vibrant antique colors of road and brick offset by drab grays and whites of deteriorating structures. Everything about this town seemed different from her home, which consisted of new subdivisions, cookie cutter houses, and muted non-offensive colors, which popped up in every conceivable tract of open land.
Dr. Darrin Dunbar removed his Georgia Tech jacket while he steadied the steering wheel with his thighs. Ashley never saw her father wear any clothes other than freebies handed out to the faculty of the Psychology department. She wondered if he ever had to buy clothes anymore. Probably his underwear displayed the college logo.
“Are you aiming at every pothole on the road?” Ashley asked.
Her father peered into the rear view mirror, though at his own reflection, not at his daughter. He brushed a strand of dark brown hair out of his eyes. The traffic snarled with starts and stops not aided by traffic lights situated at every block. The professor wove in and out of lanes in the small four-wheeled torture chamber. Ashley laughed. She noted that it made the point clear his academic excellence did not translate to navigating bargain automobiles through city traffic.
“You’re going to kill us, you know,” Ashley said.
Her father remained focused on the road. He offered no response.
She continued through his silence, straining to think of conversation topics to break the silence. “You told me once that bumps in the road build character, I didn’t think that extended beyond metaphoric, but maybe you meant that,” she said. Ashley wanted to impress her father with her vocabulary, and expected a response.
The lack of response disappointed her.
The springs in the seat poked into Ashley’s behind while the vehicle trudged through potholes. A large rut in the road lifted her off the seat and banged her head on the sloped ceiling of the hatchback.
Dr. Dunbar switched the radio station several times until he arrived at a smooth jazz station.
“And it only took you fifteen minutes to find Cleveland’s version of elevator jazz,” Ashley said. “You’re getting slow.”
Her father shook his head and rolled his eyes. After a pause, Darrin focused on Ashley in the rear view mirror. “I’ve suspected for a longtime my daughter is high-maintenance, and this further proves it.”
Ashley turned her head toward the window and mumbled. “You’d have to spend at least five minutes with me to figure that out.”
In the front seat of the car sat her father’s research partner for investigations, Dr. Joyce Lyman. “What was that, young lady?” Dr. Lyman asked, as she turned in the front seat, she locked Ashley’s gaze with black eyes and hooked nose. A clinical psychiatrist, Dr. Lyman operated a private practice in Atlanta. Ashley despised her as she felt she treated everyone like a patient. Her demeanor appeared cold and judgmental, which happened in the absence of a soul, Ashley thought.
As Ashley’s father dragged her along on these investigations, Dr. Lyman came in tow with her son, Keith, junior to Ashley by a year. The two acted like siblings. Ashley experienced pangs of sympathy for the boy because she watched his mother treat him terribly, belittling him at every turn.
Four times a year, a team of researchers leaves their comfortable careers to assist Dr. Fran Rogers, head of the Physics Department at Georgia Tech University, in his study on paranormal events. Researching ghosts in non-technical language. Ashley accompanied her father for the first time on her fifth birthday nine years ago.
Ashley often pointed out despite all the degrees compiled by members of this team, they have yet to find a ghost, not once.
Dr. Rogers is a top expert in the subject of scientific paranormal research. At Georgia Tech, Dr. Fran, as he likes people to call him, teaches an experimental course called Parapsychology. His studies and research brought a scientific approach to the topic of supernatural and paranormal studies, and his critics suggest his conclusions are too scientific with no emotional elements.
Dr. Fran’s unofficial goal is to disprove anything supernatural exists. He refuses to acknowledge he is against the concept of paranormal as a reality, because that statement is an emotional conclusion and he only recognizes the scientific. Dr. Fran has not seen any scientific proof of supernatural events. For this reason, Dr. Fran’s reputation ranked high in the skeptical community, and his reputation allowed him to search for the most renowned hauntings.
Dr. Fran called his team Psi-Ence. The group covered all bases of paranormal research in the name of science in the form of multiple disciplines. One part of the team consisted of several scientists with high-tech equipment to study the site and the environment.
Another aspect of the group includes several psychics, which Ashley found funny because Dr. Fran thinks psychics are frauds. To back up his thesis a few years ago, he tested many psychics with simple controlled experiments, such as blindfold identification of playing cards. Not one psychic who advertised their professional services tested higher than non-psychic people off the street. Several friends referred a few individuals to Dr. Fran as potential psychics. These individuals were not professional mediums and did not advertise. They displayed an uncanny ability to predict the future and read minds. These people rated many standard deviations above normal guesses. Dr. Fran wrote his conclusions in several periodicals that these “higher than average people” do not read minds in actuality, see the future, or even talk to ghosts. His theory suggests they perceive the world differently by using different portions of their brains. Dr. Fran refers to these individuals as Perceptors and a part of his team.
Doctors Dunbar and Lyman offer psychological viewpoints to the experiments and events. Their running theory consists of two parts. The first is a psychological profile of people that have the need to see ghosts as a way of fulfilling a void in their lives that love or acceptance is absent. The second theory was the study of large rooms versus small rooms. Large rooms are more often perceived as haunted.
The only variance in the team is an occasional objective observer. These individuals bring no scientific expertise, only an honest and open viewpoint. The goal of any Psi-Ence investigation is to gather as much evidence, which can consist of scientific, psychic, and personal experience. From this point, every experience must have corroborating evidence.
To keep the experiment objective, Dr. Fran made all travel arrangements in secret to eliminate the risk of any research performed ahead of time. This morning, the team arrived at Hartsfield-Jackson Airport in Atlanta at ten o’clock. The associates only knew the travels were limited to the United States, as the trip required no passport. Upon arrival at the airport, they discovered the destination as Cleveland.
“So, do you know anything about where we’re going?” Dr. Lyman asked Dr. Dunbar.
“I don’t,” he said. “All I’m aware of is Dr. Fran is excited about this one.”
“Why is he excited?” Ashley asked.
No one in the car made a sound.
“Dad,” she asked again. “What is so different about this one?”
“You know I don’t know,” he said along with a snort.
“I hope we at least have a TV, this is usually boring,” Ashley said. “Unless we should actually see a ghost on this ghost hunt. I don’t think I’d know what to do if we saw a ghost.”
“There are no such things as ghosts,” Dr. Lyman snapped.
“Then why do you spend so much time investigating them?” Ashley asked.
Dr. Lyman sighed. “So we can disprove these silly notions people have about ghosts.”
“You don’t think this house may actually be haunted?” Keith asked in a hushed voice.
His mother shook her head in the front seat while there was silence in the car.
“I remember on our last gig, the scientists were excited when the temperature dropped two degrees,” Ashley said
“That was a big deal,” her Dad said. “At least, to them.” Ashley noticed the inevitable qualification to someone else’s observations in their answers.
“It was night, it gets colder at night, of course,” Dr. Lyman said. “That hardly proves anything.”
 “To think we came all this way to see the temperature change,” Ashley said.
The car jerked to a right turn on Franklin Boulevard. Less than a block on the road, the lead car in the caravan slowed before it turned left into a driveway. The remaining cars followed.
An iron gate opened to allow the vehicles in.

Wednesday, November 9, 2011

The Franklin Castle - Chapter 1

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 The wallpaper separated from the plaster, pieces dangled along the wall in curled strips. Archer Ryan inspected a large piece at the top of the third floor stairs. With a gentle tug, he pulled the section away from the wall. The yellowed flower print disintegrated in his hands.
Archer shook his head. A shock of bright red hair dropped across his eyes. With an unconscious flick of the wrist, he brushed the strands aside. With the same hand, the iPhone slipped from his grasp and clattered to the ground.
A small muffled voice emerged from the fallen mobile device. “Archer, what’s going on?”
Archer retrieved the phone and looked into the camera. “Sorry, Jules,” he said. “Just like the house, I’m falling apart. I guess when you buy a hundred year old house; problems are bound to arise, both with the house and the owner.”
“What did you expect?” Jules said with her round face visible on the small screen.
“You’re right, for the price I paid, I should be happy anything is still standing.”
Archer changed the view to look out and held out the camera in front of him so Jules saw what he did. He stepped off the stairway into the third floor library and strolled down the row of shelves, panning the camera while he ran his finger down the spines of the books, creating a cloud of dust. Each book appeared in an advanced state of decay.
“It looks like many of these books are first editions from the 1950’s,” he said. “The Wall by John Hersey, Steamboat Gothic by Frances Parkinson Keyes, and This I Believe by Edward R. Murrow. They should be valuable. However, with their condition in such poor shape, the books are probably worthless. I think the only future for the books will be for kindle in the fireplace for heat when I’m broke and cold in the winter.”
“You won’t be broke. I’m sure you will invent some new software app and get rich all over again. And besides, you could keep these book and actually read them, you geek,” Jules said. “Put down your Kindle for a minute and look at three dimensional books.”
“Keep them, oh no,” he said. “Besides print being dead, the castle is already enough of a firetrap. I read that last winter some homeless man was cooking rat downstairs and nearly burned the place down with all the papers in here.”
“That’s a pleasant image,” Jules said. “Are you turned off by the concept of antique home ownership yet?”
“No, Jules,” he said. “I will not let this spoil the reveling in my conquest. This is the fulfillment of a lifelong dream. I wish you could be here for the celebration rather than working out in the Valley.”
“You have the next best thing. You should invite your mother to join you.”
Archer laughed. “Oh, no, my mother will not be here for this. My whole family thinks I’m quite demented for buying this house.”
“This place just reeks of nineteenth century opulent traditional style. So stuffy. So bourgeoisie. So unlike you,” she said.
“What do you mean it is unlike me? I love every part of this old house,” Archer said.
“Oh, yeah, that bright red hair is so nineteenth century,” Jules said. “Speaking of which, it still looks pink after Antwan botched your dye job last week. Are you ever going to fix it? You should sue over that.”
“I thought it looked pretty good,” Archer said. “I like how it clashes with my yellow checked pants and red tennis shoes.” Archer panned the camera down at his pants and shoes.
“You look like you’re wearing clothes that even Goodwill rejected,” Jules said.
Archer panned the camera around the hall of books. The north side of the library, beyond the stairs, opened into a large hallway that lead to two rear bedrooms and a bath.
“The built-in bookshelves look beautiful,” Jules said.
“It breaks my heart to know that behind the shelves lay patches of rotted wallboards,” Archer said. “I’m afraid all these shelves will come down with the walls. On the surface, this place doesn’t look too bad and it is functioning. Move my furniture in, and I should be able to live with the renovation crew.”
Archer continued with the tour. “Set in the west wall in the middle of the books is a remarkably preserved functioning stone fireplace.”
“Perfect to burn all the worthless books in,” Jules commented. “I can’t believe I’m actually encouraging someone to burn books. You know, now that you have a stately mansion, you must adopt a fake British accent.”
Archer laughed and intoned in his best English inflection. “The south wall contains a large picture window with an expansive view of Franklin Boulevard,” Archer started to laugh. “I can’t do the accent. My father would turn in his grave knowing that a third generation Irishman does anything British.”
Archer tried to wipe his sleeve on the glass. “If you could actually see Franklin Boulevard through the streaks of age and grime on the glass pane, you’d see a small park across the street.”
“I’ll take your word for it,” Jules said.
Archer turned around and bumped into a pile of broken furniture. He fell forward and the mobile phone slipped from his hand and slid across the floor.
“You’ve got to stop doing that to me,” Jules shouted.
“Sorry, dear,” Archer said as retrieved the phone.
He walked through a door in the east wall.
“This is my favorite room in the house. This will be my master bedroom,” Archer said. “And it’s a good thing that you can’t smell the rotten smell coming out of this room. A little Listerine and we’ll be much better for a while.”
Archer swept the camera around the room. The unique bedroom served as the rounded turret on the front corner of the house. The circular wall consisted of five windows, each six-foot tall and rose from the wainscoting. Archer arched the camera view to the ceiling turret where it formed a steeple above the bed. Visible wooden support beams converged at the top to support the point. The evening sky peeked in through several absent boards.
“This will be an incredible room when finished,” Archer said.
A fancy chandelier hung from center of the turret. He flicked the light switch and expected that the fixture to brighten the room. Disappointed, Archer found only a dim beam of light from a single functioning bulb creeping across the ceiling. Even the halogen light that filtered in the windows from the streetlamp provided more illumination.
“Now the part you’ve been waiting for,” Archer said. He set the phone on a shelf between the windows at an angle where Jules would see him clearly. Archer laid a folder and a shopping bag on the table next to the window. He opened the manila folder revealed various closing documents related to this house, which Archer signed a little more than an hour ago at the attorney’s office. A newspaper clipping attached to the front of the folder displayed the title: “House of Evil.”
Archer held the article up to the phone and read the first few paragraphs of the text to Jules. He stopped on a line near the bottom of the first paragraph.
No one can live in this house,” he finished. “So, Jules, with that ominous note, we shall proceed with our inaugural house warming festivities.”
He moved a decrepit wooden straight-back chair to the table and sat down. His gaunt lean frame made the chair groan. Archer opened the shopping bag and removed a rectangle box labeled Parker Brother’s Ouija Board. Archer purchased the glow-in-the-dark model at Target on the way to the house. He ripped open the box like a kid on Christmas morning. Without taking time to read the instructions, Archer set the board on the table. The cardboard square depicted the alphabet in two curved rows followed by a row of numbers from one to nine followed by zero. The words “Yes”, in the top left corner, and “No” in the right corner. The bottom of the board read “Good Bye”.
Archer tore open a plastic bag and removed a white, heart-shaped object called the planchette. It contained a plastic window on the narrow end to see the numbers and letters below. The concept is that a ghost will move the planchette around the board, spelling words and answering questions. He dropped the object on the board, and lightly touched both index fingers to the planchette.
“Now let’s see if there are really any ghosts here like they say,” he said aloud.
Archer sat immobile at the table. His hands lingered on the planchette, in anticipation of something happening.
From above him, Archer heard a clink. He looked up and saw the dingy chandelier sway in a slight circle.
Archer furrowed his brow. “I’m seeing the chandelier move, Jules,” he said. “I don’t know how this is possible since there is no air conditioning and I can’t feel any draught up here.”
The hairs on the back of Archer’s neck rose. “Something is in here,” he said. “Are you hearing any voices, Jules?”
“I’m hearing some background sounds,” she said. “I can’t tell what they are.”
“Maybe there are some kids outside.” He stood and peered out the window. The road and park were empty. “Not coming from outside. The sounds seem to be all around me. It sounds like children. It is getting louder. Do you hear it?”
“I hear something now,” Jules said. “It’s children.”
Archer felt panic rise in him. “I’m touching the spirit world, Jules,” he said. “This is freaking me out.” He started to rise from the chair, but stopped and took a deep breath.
“No, I am going to get through this,” he said. “This is the reason I am here. I bought this house because of its haunted history.”
The sound of giggles and shoes shuffling on the wood floor increased, despite the lack of any physical form. Archer felt a tap on his left shoulder. It seemed so real that he looked in that direction. When he did, an unseen hand tapped his right shoulder.
“Jules, they’re playing with me!” He laughed while the invisible children ran around his chair. “I could get used to this. I can live with this.”
Archer felt a shock when the planchette moved on its own under his fingers. “It’s moving, Jules,” Archer said. “I’ve never used Ouija boards before. I thought they were phony. But, look at this! My Halloween party this year is going to be such a hit.”
The plastic window on the planchette stopped over the letter “H”, next to “E”, then “L”. The object paused for a moment before it slid to “O”.
Archer furrowed his brow. “H-E-L-O? What does it mean?” Archer said. “Hello? Are you saying hello?”
“Ask them something,” Jules said.
“Are you having fun playing today?”
The planchette moved to the word “Yes”.
The murmured sounds died down and the footsteps stopped. Archer experienced the sensation of a soft touch on his shoulder that differed from the playful taps of the children. The touch comforted him.
“What’s going on?” He asked.
The planchette began to move over letters. M-O-M-S-H-E-R-E.
Archer considered the message for a moment. “Is Mom here?” He asked.
The planchette moved to “Yes”.
Archer’s face widened with a large, toothy smile. “I feel so many emotions. I feel love and a giddy joy inside,” he said as giggled.
He began to sing a song, Best of Both Worlds by Hannah Montana. All the activity stopped in the room.
“What’s wrong?” He asked.
“Archer, you moron,” Jules said. “Unless these children died in the last two years, they’re not going to know a Hannah Montana song.”
“Good point,” Archer said.
He began to sing London Bridge. Soon, the spirits reacted by humming along with him. Archer swayed back and forth to the tune.
“Why would anyone be afraid of this house?” Archer asked. “This is going to be great.”
“I can’t believe what I’m seeing,” Jules said. “I wish I were there.”
“Are you recording this?”
“Yes.”
“How convincing of evidence do you think it is?” He asked.
“You could probably have faked this whole thing, so by itself it doesn’t mean very much,” Jules said.
Archer started another song. “Ring around the roses, pocketful of posies, ashes, ashes, we all fall—“
Like a kill switch, the sensation changed. The warm feeling ended abruptly and a new experience started. It began like a tickle inside, a sensation so subtle it nearly escaped his notice. The transformation alerted no concern in Archer right away. He experienced an imperceptible acknowledgement of something different in the room. The pressure in the room dropped, similar to the atmospheric change before a storm. The air contained a hint of electricity.
“Archer, what’s going on?” Jules asked.
“Something has changed.”
The mood started to transform. Increased energy swept through him, he felt the movement of the unseen children run from the room. The warm maternal hand on his shoulder vanished. The new sensation inside his body intensified to the pit of his stomach.
Archer lifted his hands from the planchette and wrapped his arms around his chest. He perceived anger and hatred becoming palpable in front of and inside of him.
The planchette on the Ouija board began to move without Archer touching it.
“Is it moving by itself?” Jules shouted through the phone.
The object moved with fast and deliberate action. Dread crept though Archer’s body while he watched the planchette.
“Who is this?” Archer asked.
The planchette stopped on “D”, then “E”, then “A”, before it moved across the board to stop on “D” again.
“Dead?” Archer whimpered. “I’m sorry.”
Archer’s stomach churned and he vomited on the Ouija board.
The Ouija board flew from the table, slammed against the wall, and fell to the ground. Lying on the wood planks, the board tore into pieces.
Archer sat for a moment in the chair, rooted to the floor, unable to move.
The chandelier above his head swung in wide circles.
He gathered the energy to push up from the chair and ran from the room. The door slammed behind him. The only memory Archer retained of leaving the house was the sound of Jules’ voice through the phone still placed in the room.
She was calling his name.

The Franklin Castle - Floor Plan

The Franklin Castle


Floor Plan


The Franklin Castle

The Franklin Castle
by
Daune O'Shaunnessey



Table of Contents


The Franklin Castle is a story of an investigation of a haunted house. It is presented in serialized fashion with a chapter at a time, as I finish editing them. The Franklin Castle actually is a real Gothic mansion in Cleveland, Ohio, and it is reported to be extremely haunted. The history and back story about the original tenants and other former owners is largely factual. However I’ve added some morsels for dramatic purposes. The mansion still exists in Cleveland’s Ohio City district, where many people over the years have attempted to live or turn the house into a business. Recent years have seen the house remain abandoned and catch fire. The structure of the house in the story is somewhat different than that of the real Franklin Castle for dramatic purposes. 


The Franklin Castle does not contain any gratuitous violence, strong language, or sexual situations. It is intended for a general audience from Young Adult up.

Tuesday, November 1, 2011

NANOWRIMO and Future Serialized Fiction in my Blog



New years resolutions are coming early for me.
 
NANOWRIMO stands for the National Novel Writing Month. The goal of NANOWRIMO is to start and finish a first draft of a novel during the month of November. This is a great motivation tool for me, and has been very successful in the past. Over the past two years, I’ve written the first draft of the Fenian Avenger and The Order of the Benevolent Souls. As I reflected on what I was going to do this year, I realized that starting and finishing a first draft has never been a problem for me. I can do that in a matter of weeks with the right organization and thought. It’s finishing the second or final draft with editing that is the challenge.

I’ve recently purchased a book written by a friend of mine named Bobbie Christmas. The book is called Write in Style. The book is about editing and fixing grammar in a way that publishers and editors like. It approaches the concept from the Find command in a word processor. For example, look for the word “was” in your works and replace it with a stronger action word. Something simple like this is ingenious, as it finally connected what I needed to do.

However, I discovered that in a first draft novel, there is a HUGE amount of finding and replacing required bringing it up to speed. I’ve found that I’ll spend a couple of months writing a first draft – while my editing skills get cold, and then a couple of months editing it – while my writing skills get cold.

I’ve decided that I’m going to try something different this fall, hoping to keep both skills sharp (and potentially eliminate a lot of the editing I need to do). My NANOWRIMO project is not going to be a first draft, but finishing an edit in one month on a novel.

Many years ago, I wrote a short story called The Franklin Castle. Several years ago, I lengthened that story into a novel. Then a terrible thing happened in my attempt to keep my data safe. I saved the copy of the first draft of the novel on a jump drive, since I didn’t want to leave it on a work laptop. I thought I put that jump drive in a safe place. Maybe I did, but it didn’t stay there. When I went to look at that book to edit, I couldn’t find the drive. I looked everywhere; I could not find the device. That was over two years ago. One day about a month ago, my daughter Lexi was sitting in the front seat of my car, and reached down into the crack of the seat and removed that very jump drive. For two years it was nestled down with trash, crumbs, and French fries. I quickly inserted the drive, and there was the last version of the book.

I am going to turn that first draft into a final edit during the month of November.

In keeping with the resolution to keep both my writing and editing skills sharp, I’ve decided to use this blog to publish serialized fiction. Every week or two weeks, I plan to continue a storyline, adding a chapter at a time. This forces me to think ahead and have my plot down solid (because there will be no going back and editing what is already published), work the first draft a chapter at a time, and immediately edit that first draft for final publishing quality.

I’m really looking forward to the serialized fiction. I have one story line to start with, a secret group called The Green Trinity that I’ve referred to in a few other pieces of my work. I’m interested in establishing their back story, and then potentially moving forward to episodic fiction. I may include other works in this, for example, The Franklin Castle as that is finished in November may lend itself to presenting a chapter at a time.

I hope you all are able to follow along and I hope you’ll enjoy my work.